3br = express yourself
seratm | Sat, 11/10/2012 - 00:07
Brief from client
this is a logo for team in our college 3br means express i typed the word in Arabic also i make it as a shape of human with powerful view
this is may be my first work in logo i really need you critique as strong as it is i will learn from it
3 Comments
This angle on the stroke design seems better than the others. The brush type on the stroke looks bad, try another type brush. The vertical line needs to be properly spaced between the 3br and discover yourself. You may also not need the capital "D" given these circumstances.
I'm sorry to be a negative Nancy again, but isn't this just a squiggly line that was drawn in Illustrator with an art brush applied?
To anyone that looks at this that has done work in Illustrator, it looks like a 'symbol' that took all of 10 seconds to make. Same problems with the font here that I mentioned in the other version...
Once again, I'd just start over. Try to really MAKE something, create something. Logos that are created with the flip of a wrist that actually wind up looking good are few and far between- and this isn't one of them!
This is an idealess nothing.