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I think this is a good starting point, I am in the printing paper industry as well.
I like how you incorporated the fold and roll i just think they need some work,
the roll just looks like a big circle placed awkwardly on the P maybe you can incorporate that a little better, also the fold on the A makes no sense were it is, imagine that fold un folded were you have it. maybe give a little slash of color, and change the type-style on the name to laywery and strict
Could you possibly combine the A and the P? Maybe make the right side of the A blend into the left side of the P, does that make sense? Are you going to make the paper fold or the paper roll a different color? The lack of color and relatively simple design make it a little drab. Also, that font (is it Birch or something?) doesn't look right. Maybe use a sans serif OR if you'd like a serifed font try a stronger one with a slab serif!?
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I think this is a good starting point, I am in the printing paper industry as well.
I like how you incorporated the fold and roll i just think they need some work,
the roll just looks like a big circle placed awkwardly on the P maybe you can incorporate that a little better, also the fold on the A makes no sense were it is, imagine that fold un folded were you have it. maybe give a little slash of color, and change the type-style on the name to laywery and strict
Could you possibly combine the A and the P? Maybe make the right side of the A blend into the left side of the P, does that make sense? Are you going to make the paper fold or the paper roll a different color? The lack of color and relatively simple design make it a little drab. Also, that font (is it Birch or something?) doesn't look right. Maybe use a sans serif OR if you'd like a serifed font try a stronger one with a slab serif!?