Amari
Beaky | Fri, 07/24/2015 - 12:07
Brief from client
No client - just for my own amusement
No client - just for my own amusement.
I'm not a professional designer I just create logo's for fun and thought I would upload one to see the response I got!
6 Comments
Thanks for dropping in!
Despite the handmade aesthetic, they still feel a bit rigid/forced, except maybe the "I". If you were going for a version 2, I would make the letters a lot looser and "imperfect," if that makes sense. The cross line on the A seems like it extends too far to the sides as well. I probably would make the first letter about half that size.
Call me crazy but I think if this was made for a Parisian women cloth store or brand, it'd be a slam dunk!
Of course there'd be some tweaking to do, chiefly the x-height of the i. But globally, it looks pretty good.
Thanks so much for your comments! =) Will do some tweaks and post again asap.
Everything looks too perfect (the lines, curves and end caps of your letters)
it doesn't feel authentic. I don't get any real feel from this one sorry :)
PS: the A looks way too big next to the rest of the letters
Yeah, definitely needs to have a more handwritten quality if that's the aim here.
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