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too much things going on there...the font is not the best and the kilometer is out of the movie. Use a more readable font, you can keep the manner of this one but this has problems with kerning and looks amateurish. Keep the flames but only on the bapusa and make art deco smaller and with another font OR the same size with bapusa AND on the same line.
I think Hueroth said it all, it looks like those drawings little school boys do. You need more definite lines in the typeface to get the "racing-type" feeling - that's what you want to sell, isn't it?
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too much things going on there...the font is not the best and the kilometer is out of the movie. Use a more readable font, you can keep the manner of this one but this has problems with kerning and looks amateurish. Keep the flames but only on the bapusa and make art deco smaller and with another font OR the same size with bapusa AND on the same line.
I think Hueroth said it all, it looks like those drawings little school boys do. You need more definite lines in the typeface to get the "racing-type" feeling - that's what you want to sell, isn't it?
I like the attempt on this one but there is too much going on simple is better!
Let the logo speak for its self and not all the distracting elements