BioSweet
David Tomas | Mon, 09/22/2014 - 19:37
Brief from client
Logo for a natural bio-sweetner called Stevia.
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10 Comments
This is way better, I think. The leafs are a nice addition but I'm not so sure about the stem.
Also, I would justify "sweet" on both side of "bio".
I don't like it. Not my style. Anyone knows how to delete? :D This site has very primitive options.
Cut stem. Justify "SWEET". Done. If you want some more inspiration - http://collectionerus.ru/collections/publishing-company-logos/
the stem represents the main symbolistic, because it's a product made entirely from leaves.
And.. great website you linked me, but I don't want to inspire from the comunist generation. We are the new school. :D
This logo, is meant to appear on packages, many of them with different backgrounds, so, the background is irelevant now. I will see what I decide on this project, and come back maybe.
Looks like 810 in a glance, maybe can do something about the B? Sharper edges on the B leftside? The I has sharp edges, but the B and O has round edges.
Secondly, this is just a matter of personal preference, maybe if the word sweet can be justified the same length as the word BIO? Maybe it looks more balance? What do you think?
There are some variations with the justified fonts around here somewhere.
I like it overall, it just has an unfinished "sloppy" quality to it. I think you need to sit there with some anchor points and adjust what you have but it really is a great start. I would maybe work on placement of "sweet"and the size of it as well. I would also work on the sharp corners and rounded corners of "Bio" I think that is what is making it look sloppy especially on the bottom of the "B." But I do like this one out of all 8 versions. Keep going! :)
I abandoned this project and replace it with another aproach. This, the way it is here, it think is ok. I will tell why: the bottom text, is unjustified because I think it ads a touch of personality to the whole logo. I didn't want it to be very common, and it worked. As a proof of that, in every feedback posted here, I am advised to justify that bottom text because it doesn't seem ok. If that is the common thinking, and I think I did a good job steping out of it with. The leaves are ok. The whole edges are "sloppy" ( irregular ) intentionally. It would have become more irregular if I would have continued this project. Thanks for the feedback Kayla Roxanne.