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I like the abstract bird symbol, but the typography needs work. The Brios font looks unprofessional, I'm sure you can find a better handwritten font. The subtext looks too serious compared to your symbol.
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I like the abstract bird symbol, but the typography needs work. The Brios font looks unprofessional, I'm sure you can find a better handwritten font. The subtext looks too serious compared to your symbol.
I concur with jefzor. The main fonts looks flimsy and is barely readable. It almost looks like the B is from a different typeface.
Also, 2 italic fonts rarely complement each other.
The general composition is too cramped. All the elements are too close to each other. Loosening things up a little bit wouldn't hurt.
But globally, this is off to a good start.
Espectacular el símbolo, la tipografía no me convence ;)