Car Hire/Rental Firm Bali
Dan Tyler | Tue, 07/04/2017 - 02:40
Brief from client
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13 Comments
It would be great if there was some form of brief to go off of.
I just don't understand why there is a wave graphic for a Car Rental company.
I don't see any fundamental change since the first versions you've posted a while ago.
As I said last time, it's one thing to have a symbol which doesn't figuratively represent what the business you're dealing with (as long as it's impactful and memorable, it's more than fineà, but here it's just too confusing and misguiding. Anyone will see that will think of something sea or beach related.
I think that a symbol made of stylized " J M A " combo. But I do agree with above commentaries about how unrelated that looks with a nature of rental business.
Hah. As expected from amateur designers.. Why does a logo need to tell what the company does? You guys have a lot to learn.. This is for starter, thank me later http://www.logodesigntips.co.uk/
if we are all just a bunch of "ameteurs" to you....why do you keep uploading this logo for our advice??? smh
but hey- at least you got rid of that gawd awful font you had on this logo 3 months ago. =)
I said that in my bottom comment. I don't even see student designers using fonts that awful.
Dude really? You get butt hurt for a couple of negative yet constructive feedbacks on your logo?
And read my comment one more time, I did say that's a logo doesn't have to be a literal representation of what one's business does. I merely pointed out that yours is just confusing and misguiding at first glance.You had to mention car rental twice in the word mark and the subtext, which makes your logo even more complicated.
You've posted that same thing a few months ago and got the same comments. And apparently, we are not the only ones to think it doesn't really work:
http://www.webdesignerforum.co.uk/topic/86276-could-i-get-some-feedback-...
http://www.webdesignerforum.co.uk/topic/86258-could-i-get-some-feedback-...
http://www.webdesignerforum.co.uk/topic/86299-new-simplified-logo-design...
And even there, you seem to have brought that same shitty attitude. If one person says you are wrong, maybe they are wrong. But if several people say it, start asking yourself some questions...
You have spent months working on this logo for that small time company in bumfuck nowhere and you're still clinging on to the same idea. You really need to let go, and or least try to be receptive to what people have to say. But you decided to just be an ungrateful brat and go all condescending on people who only meant to help a fellow designer.
And please don't lecture people because you've read some stuff on the internet. Only good professional work will back you up. And right now, I fail to see any.
Now, if you regret your childish reaction and decide to be an adult about this whole thing, I'll gladly erase that petty comment you've just left and all will be forgotten.
I honestly don't think I've ever seen you speak like a normal person, you always speak in a formal manner for critiques.
This was great.
Can I thumbs up this please? lol :)
To be honest with you I do not really see waives in a symbol , but see crocodile's teeth closing on a client instead. Your symbol needs to be rethink and sketch over.
Okay there is a huge difference between having a symbol that isn't a literal indication of what the company does.
And having a logo that is completely misleading and doesn't communicate to their audience at all.
The condescending tone from you on a website mixed with both seasoned designers and people getting their foot in the door is unwanted, unneeded, and so far not backed up by any decent designs of your own.
All you'd have to do here, is change the damned color of your JMA. That would erase EVERYONES confusion about the connection to waves and the beach.
Instead, you've decided to pretend you're a superior designer while putting versions of this logo up, with fonts you very obviously downloaded from dafont.