cardioprotection
chefuss | Sat, 08/27/2016 - 17:07
Brief from client
The logo is to promote that the El Hierro Island is cardio protected, meaning that the Island is committed with the protection of their people is health matters. (Sorry if the explanation is not clear but i don't speak really good english). The company ask me to make the logo taking in mind that the island has a representative tree: La Sabina, which has the characteristic to be bend by the wind. They want to use the tree and a heart.
9 Comments
This is another version
I really like your top symbol, it feels more natural and organic. You can try to add some amount of leafs without over doing it and see how it will play out.Good, solid work.
Hi, thank you, i will try what you suggest, thank you
great start. not a fan of the leaf version, but wondering how it might look if lines just because thinner at the end.
Hi, thank you for the ideas, i will try what you suggest. Thanks
I like the first version, but I would try to make the bottom right look more tree like. I might also like to see a little variation in the size of veins/branches. They look a little too uniform.
Hi, thank you for you comment and suggestion, i have made some changes in the logo. I've placed the new version as a comment below. Thanks again.
Hi, following the differents suggestions here, i have made some changes in the logo. I uploaded it here because i want to continue with this reviews.
The changes were, a little bit the color, the width of the branches making them less uniform, more organics, and erasing some of the branches for cleaning a little bit. About the suggestion of cooperads about making the bottom right look more tree like, i think he means making it more straight , but this tree, specifically, has the characteristic to be all bended by the wind, it does not look like a tree, even in the bottom. Thank you
I like the tapered ends. Repost this on the main site so others can comment. I am still not fond of the bottom right of the "tree" trunk.