This is a sticker for my personal logo. I want to use it in the future for clothing design. In the black you can see my initials CS3. Tear it apart people!
Your biggest problem can be seen right off the thumbnail: The left part of te logo is invisible at small size.
Also, it'd be easier to give you feedback if you could upload the jpeg of the logo itself, not a picture of the stcker.
But from what I can see, there is definitely some great potential in this logo. I really like that negative space you got going on.
Keep it up!
Have you considered making the red a solid shape as you have the white? It will help with the visibility at small sizes and could make the negative space more prominent??
You need to crop it to a rectangle around the cs3 if you want the negative space characters to be visible.
I like how the white area looks like an 8-bit 'this is sparta' pose, not sure what the shape on the left is though. A bathroom stall with sink?