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clothing logo

big387 | Tue, 01/02/2018 - 07:17

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Logo critique

This is a sticker for my personal logo. I want to use it in the future for clothing design. In the black you can see my initials CS3. Tear it apart people!

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Shawali | Tue, 01/02/2018 - 17:00
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Your biggest problem can be seen right off the thumbnail: The left part of te logo is invisible at small size.

Also, it'd be easier to give you feedback if you could upload the jpeg of the logo itself, not a picture of the stcker.

But from what I can see, there is definitely some great potential in this logo. I really like that negative space you got going on.

Keep it up!

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j.o.y | Tue, 01/02/2018 - 18:53

Have you considered making the red a solid shape as you have the white? It will help with the visibility at small sizes and could make the negative space more prominent??

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Shawali | Tue, 01/02/2018 - 19:20
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This.

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Matt_B | Tue, 01/02/2018 - 20:29
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You need to crop it to a rectangle around the cs3 if you want the negative space characters to be visible.

I like how the white area looks like an 8-bit 'this is sparta' pose, not sure what the shape on the left is though. A bathroom stall with sink?

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