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THE IDEA IS GOOD BUT YOU CAN CHANGE THE TYPOGRAPHY LIKE A HELVETICA CONDENSED LIGHT AND THE SYMBOL, USE A ABSTRACT FORM OR USE A LINE O STROKE THE BIRD FORM , USE ONE COLOR, THE CYAN
I like it. The type is need to be closer together. there a bit too much gap there. The colour is nice, but I think you need to introduce another colour. It just looks a little too monotone.
The only thing I would change is to harmonize the approach of the characters "cygnus" and maybe use a blue more intense but it work very well like this. Good job ;)
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THE IDEA IS GOOD BUT YOU CAN CHANGE THE TYPOGRAPHY LIKE A HELVETICA CONDENSED LIGHT AND THE SYMBOL, USE A ABSTRACT FORM OR USE A LINE O STROKE THE BIRD FORM , USE ONE COLOR, THE CYAN
Could you please turn your caps lock off ;)
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YOU'RE TYPING IN CAPITALS MAKES IT HARD TO READ..
Try typing like this.
I like it. The type is need to be closer together. there a bit too much gap there. The colour is nice, but I think you need to introduce another colour. It just looks a little too monotone.
The only thing I would change is to harmonize the approach of the characters "cygnus" and maybe use a blue more intense but it work very well like this. Good job ;)
The swan is way too big and should be abstracted more, maybe you can use the outline instead of the fill? The type is not very creative...