Eggbomb
Gigafrost | Tue, 09/25/2012 - 18:17
Brief from client
Hatching new and explosive ideas. Kaboom! Cluck cluck...
Another overhaul. Went with M@'s egg with detonator theme. Also limited the palette, made the egg more of an "egg color" and placement of text. Added a beak poking through and some outline. All critique is welcomed.
5 Comments
I like this, it's definitely a huge improvement from the second one, but (for me, anyway) I'm not sure I get the red poofs coming out of the cracks.
I whipped something ridiculously simple up (I'm on a quick lunch break and only had a minute!) just to demonstrate the kind of fuse thing that I was thinking of- or at least the placement of it. Maybe that's what's throwing me a little- the placement of the fuse there at the bottom.
Please keep uploading your changes though, I think it's such a fun idea!!
Yeah okay I will definitely take note, Thanks for the critique! I wanted to place the fuse at the top but was afraid of it looking "spermish" but it makes more sense that way XD
I'm also curious on what people think about the beak element, I may take that out along with the puffs of smoke and cracks but we'll see
I will upload more changes, hopefully I don't spam this site up too badly >.<
OK... of all your ideas this one is the better one, but still need some work on. I like sara's idea. Simple, clean and clear. Why dont you try something like that? The "pufs" are cool for a cartoon, and if you want you an use the beal to. But remove the "pufs" cause its to much noise.
I love the idea of your concept, but I'm still not seeing the "essence" of the idea in your product. This version is more on what's inside the egg than the egg itself. The term "Egg Bomb" is funny and has a certain connotation. Maybe the shell is not the answer. Maybe it's the yoke and whites that convey the "egg" symbol.
I love the idea of your concept, but I'm still not seeing the "essence" of the idea in your product. This version is more on what's inside the egg than the egg itself. The term "Egg Bomb" is funny and has a certain connotation. Maybe the shell is not the answer. Maybe it's the yoke and whites that convey the "egg" symbol.