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Eggrolla Logo

Brief from client 

This is an egg-shaped, hand-held self-massager.

This is an egg-shaped, hand-held self-massager revised to not be so creepy.

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JCBrown9105's picture
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I'm not a fan of this, and honestly creeped out by it. It doesn't look, how should I say, NSFW.

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How does this look to you?

JNF Design's picture
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Maybe it would be less creepy if you simplified the mouth of the face. I love the eyebrows because they give it a little motion.

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How does this look to you?

JNF Design's picture
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It definitely looks better, what did the first one look like?

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This was the first version. I realize I could've, and should've, just added the new version, but I'm new to this site and didn't realize it until it was too late.

JNF Design's picture
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Ah yes, I thought you removed something else. I liked the circles for the eyes in the G. It still feels a little off to me. Maybe if you just added small dimples next to the mouth in the newer version and brought back the eyes?

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Now it works much better. There was definitely something creepy about that first version, but this new one fixed that. Now I think it works fine.

I would have the basic iteration of this logo without the subtext and I would also remove the dot at the end altogether.

Good job, and welcome to the Critique Section!

CathieHarrison's picture

Thanks so much for the feedback. I'm going to show three or four versions and let my client decide which one they like. I didn't mention this earlier, but the egg itself is made of a jelly-like coating that feels like a stress ball. It also has a massager, so that's why I chose the tagline 'it feels good'.

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