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Ersie - alien game

Brief from client 

No client, I've never made a logo for a game so I wanted to have fun creating one

So, here is my second version, a lot of changes, the same base. I like it with a black background, i´ll post it on the comment section

It still needs some changes, specially on the intersection of the letters with the "tentacles"... but i think its better than the last one

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EdgarSacadura's picture
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Here it is with the black background

ErinsSonicYouth's picture
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Ok, its definitely legible now. I like the wormy vines on the letters actually.

But I feel disappointed that we completely separated EVERYTHING. I thought we could still enter-twine the letters somehow.

And call me out if I'm off base here. But could we somehow make the S more worm like. Right now its kind of reading as a "poop".

I'm mentally 12, I apologize lol.

This is also missing that nice wonky arc that the first version had, which I thought really added some character to it.

EdgarSacadura's picture
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Its been a hard project for me... maybe because i´m not used to make this kind of logos idk... I´m still fighting about the letters connections. The arc its different indeed... Thanks for the help. I´ll try not to give up on this one. :D

ErinsSonicYouth's picture
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Don't give up at all! Its super cool, but something like this is going to take a LOT of iterations to hit that "wow" factor. You're doing a great job, definitely keep it up.

Here's my thoughts: Maybe, it would be cool to take those brown vine like things, and make them interwoven.

I'm trying to find a visual for you, my mind keeps going to art styles like Machinarium

j.o.y's picture
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Yea- much better legibility! And I like the wormy letters better too.
For the S- I don't really see poo (lol) it's more like a section of intestines! You could maybe add some little ridges going around to give it more wormness? If that is what you are going for?
All in all, you making great progress with this! =)

ErinsSonicYouth's picture
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INTESTINES HAVE POO JOY.

j.o.y's picture
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don't get all technical with me! =)

Carlo_5's picture
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This is quite interesting. It definitely has that slithery alien vibe.
It seems to pop nicely on the black background.

Definitely seems more legible than version 1.

If you wanted to "connect" the letters at places have you tried perhaps having one tentacle cross between 2 letters?

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