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family peace asociation

Brief from client 

non profit organisation

need feedback what is bad,and what can be reworked

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j.o.y's picture
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Ok this will sound harsh- but bear with me! ......All of it. Rework all of it. Your type choices are standard system fonts- they are not all that interesting, nor do they compliment each other well. You have wide tracking and tight tracking. everything is very cramped.
What is the significance of the talk bubble? Why is family inside it? maybe if you give more of a brief or info about the company these things might make sense. But as of now, I can't understand any of your design choices.

kikippi's picture

10x for replay.This organisation is about to propagate family value, and idea is "no family without peace"...so peace say family.... u know what i mean?
And association suggest it is asociation To associaton family peace

Shawali's picture
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Again, I agree with Joy.

There's not much going on with this logo. It just fonts that don't compliment each other stacked up. That speech bubble would make le thing of a chat thing.

But globally this is poorly though through and executed. You need to do a lot of research, find a lot of inspiration and more importantly sketch a few hours, if not days before committing to anything on the computer.

Keep working on it!

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