Fireblade Graphics
fryblade | Thu, 08/02/2012 - 07:04
Brief from client
This logo is for my business. Im posting it for Ideas, Critiques or likes.
Thanks.
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9 Comments
When the phone number is bigger than the logo, you know you did something wrong...
This is really not working.
Yeah, the phone number is waaaaaay too big!! And I don't think you should have that much stacked information below any logo. I'd either just keep it to Fireblade graphics or at very least get rid of everything other than "& Signs".
The font you used for the title is (in my opinion) too 'much' to use for every letter. Maybe use that font for the first letters of both words and then go for something less decorative for the rest of the word? Or maybe just find a less decorative looking font and go with that for the whole thing.
Last thing, those flames. Those flames look really really clip-arty. Like clip art that was slightly modified to fit against the side of the type.
Sorry to say I think you should just go back to ye ole drawing board on this one- there's so much to fix and so little that works. You're clearly up for having fun with the logo, but I'd head off in a different direction and see what you come up with!
Agreed. I can't say it any better than this.
I have to agree with the above.
flames like cut and paste , i think use loop at text, and phone be more small think
the words "too much" are the essence of the logo. First, too much info, logos are not supposed to be so informative. Too much decorative (as sara sez above), use less of that font, and those flames.....really?
be careful that this doesn't end up in the worst logos of all time gallery.. Its shocking. the guys on here might seem harsh but truth is, they are saying exactly what fireblade customers would say when they see it. Its a good thing you uploaded here for critique before you released it into the public domain..
to summarise - if i visited a website and saw this... i would think, doesnt look prof, doesn't look trustworthy. and if this is the quality of the logo you are gonna use, i wont be holding my hopes up for great signs and graphics from you. I can 100% guarantee that if you use this logo... You will get no business what so ever. Harsh i know but you did upload for critique. Pay to get a logo done professionally or at least put some effort onto doing it!
Scary Scary!
Loose all the unnecessary items.
your number is not part of the logo only something you add after! =)
What he said :)