Logo for a company doing mainly facials & body massages.
Did a few minor changes on the face to give it a feminine touch & took some advice from others used lighter colours..
This logo is really nice, I like it a lot. It's a great way you put the face to the F. The only thing I'd suggest to work a bit more on is the eye-lash, it's standing out in a weird way.
ya it a very good one, i agree with the eye-lash problem.
you also can try too make the distance smaller between the F and the the rest of it, that makes it just "that" more readable. But its not needed and i doubt if its possible to do it.. just like it. :)
I think you fix that eyelash and you're don! Nice work. Colors are also better now!
Just saw something else: if you use the bottom curve of the F all the way againstthe chin and throat of the face?
Nice, did you try the letters touching - as it's a typeface that should "join up" - also I don't care for the "Face & Beauty" execution.
I agree with the comments above. Specifically, use the horizontal of the "F" to create the chin because the F is losing some readability as-is. Adjust the spacing to get the letters to touch, especially the "lawle" as they are obviously designed to look to have a cursive-like flow. The eyelash is awkward as it is now, maybe too high? Needs adjustment.
I question the muddy color for a beauty product.
Overall, good job!
Hi. firstly, i guess we can do without the eye lash here. Coz its a detail that can be easily lost as its too negligible. secondly the curly serif of the F on the left can also go and instead so it will look like a small cap'f' and then we can extend the right tip of the 'f' to a hair curl for the face. Other wise its superb. i love it.
m just attaching a rough thing here, may be u can work on it more. i feel the curl of a hair will add an elegant touch
aha, but where is our "F"?
This one would not be a good alternative. The F is gone, the girl has a jowl, the eye-lash is still bad looking, the top of the F got angled after the cut, the thin lines would not print properly in smaller sizes. The original version is way better, this is not a professional thing you did.
The first "L" in "Flawless" looks like a giant curly sideburn to me. That kind of throws me off...
I really like that logo, it's almost perfect! For my opinion the "F" is clearly enough readable.
Good job! I likie
I really like it, but the color that you use in this logo doesn't work to me, and the "L" is too big try to make it a little smaller, good job :D
Is good enough for me, I would play more with curls and swirls but i guess is a matter of taste here. Good job on that.
Keep it! Good work.
For your "Eyelash problem" it simple needs to be lower. In human anatomy, the mind thinks of it not as an eyelash, but more like a stray hair of some sort, lowering the lash will fix this issue or remove it altogether.
Personally I also think that your font "Face & Beauty" can be 3-4 pts bigger. it seems to be a little small for me and may cause problems if shrunk - it also seems to be floating almost with the size its at now.
For your "F" you can probably make the "tail" of the "l" after the "F" thicker, so it resembles the line at the left side of the "F" That way with the first "l" having a thicker tail, your mind will register as it being both an L and an F. My mind currently battles on that first "l"s tail as looking weird with the face, so thickening it will help. Look at my example below to see what i mean. Font in this still looks small though.
Colors are great I love them! Keep at it!