GYM and SPA
Location: Abu Dhabi, U.A.E
Theme: Shades of Blue
With a character base representing the gym
Im not a great fan of the type you choose, but I like the idea. Why dont you try with diferent fonts and with out the line??
Agree with geracao, Try choosing another font, sans serif but stay with bold and italic. I like the line but the "fitness and spa centre" should be the same italic as the above one, you get some consistency that way. The symbol is pretty but I would remove the effect from the ball, or at least attenuate it .