Dance club playing electronic music in Copenhagen, Denmark
I like the feel of this- but my one beef is I want one of the other letters to change in size. Right now it looks like G,L, and W are all the same size. So it looks like you shrank the O to make it work. If one other letter was smaller and maybe also moved off the baseline, it would have better movement.
Its okey, but not realy...
That's a really vague and unhelpful critique. Explain what's okay about it and what isn't.
Criticism like this would really put me off submitting my work here