Imperfect Ghost
Gigafrost | Thu, 09/27/2012 - 16:17
Brief from client
Logo for a potential game production company. Something using ghosts and good and evil. Representing on not only our good games but also our clever and sometimes crafty ways in terms of creating games.
Overhaul. I cleaned up the ghosts and put the shadow behind him. Any critique is welcomed.
17 Comments
ah ha! great solution! i really like this now
NOW THIS IS WHAT IM TALKING ABOUT!!
First impression very clean!
I opened and loved it! Good work!
much better than your previous versions, it's nice. An issue I would see would be that the black creature could be interpreted as checking out the angels butt...but hey, maybe my minds in the gutter, very nice :)
Haha well devils are kinda naughty ;)
2 things I would do to perfect it...... The outline of the "GOOD" ghost's left hand should be thicker (you'll lose it if this gets printed smaller) and I would angle or deepen the shadow of the "DEVILISH" ghost to see more of him!
Other than that, I love it!
Good job here, almost done. As the devil above said, make the outline of the angel a little thicker,,
Yay!! This is lookin' mighty good! I agree with taz about making the left hand a little thicker so it doesn't get lost in printing! Great revision!
yessss!!! much better!
It is really funny, but be careful, now it looks like the black guy is looking into the grey one's ass. Really. The font should be either kerned well or exchanged for a readable one. Also the company name should be a lot larger.
Funny - yes! I like
I'm in love, but i'm not sure about the typography
This version is nice.
I dont't understand the logo. Is an illustration more then a logo.
Did you read the brief?
Against the others, I prefer the past shadow, this one reflects surprise, the other one talks about to assume the own nature.
In this case, talking about an imperfect ghost, the other one tells me more.
I insist, as with a thousands of logos ago, that you need to increase the size of the text. Look at the brands you like, the names are big (as the rule says —again— one third compared with the height of the rest), an here, not as always but, following the rules will help.
Keep up the self-criticism.
I like it, but –– do you think the good ghost's hand (over the center of his body) is a bit understated? Perhaps re-draw it with the line weight of the halo? I think it gets lost right now.
I dig it, caught my attention at once... I totally agree with Roscoe, and changing the font... Not readable...