Kayleighs Design

So much better. You're really getting there. With this shape, business cards could take on a really cool design as well, since its very easy to order perfectly square business cards.

Maybe it is just my eyes, but the word "design" seems to be in a kind of wonky font. Its throwing me off that only the D is capitalized, yet the "lowercase" words are just a tad larger than the D. I think that could be tweaked a bit. Also, make sure the spacing is even. I attached a screenshot to show you what I mean.

Better indeed.

Watchout the kerning of the wordmark. With a script font, you got to be extra careful as the ligatures depend on a well adjusted kerning.

Look how each ligature doesn't properly and organically connect with the following character. And now the S is totally disconnected from the rest.