Knothead Photography
VanguardDesign | Thu, 04/05/2018 - 22:24
Brief from client
This is a logo for my friend's father's photography, by the name of Knothead Photography. His grandpa used to always call him knothead. He wanted silhouettes of a man and child fishing, representing his grandpa and him. And he wanted trees. I tried to form the K shape with the silhouettes, as well.
What do y'all think?
8 Comments
Here is a color version
Sorry, but all I can see is a father and son having a pissing contest. Might want to rethink this one...
Yeah I get that. I can see it more in the grandpa. The kid is fine I think, due to his body / rod angle - No one pees like that.
Anyway, I added the little rungs on the fishing poles. That should make it clear it's not a stream of urine.
That helps a bit. I PEE LIKE THAT! When I'm in the woods like they are. I think the reason it looks like that is because the rods are angled directly at their groins. Could you adjust where they are protruding from?
Yeah I will try re-positioning. But the kid’s rod is protruding from his chest. Unless everyone else sees the kid peeing, I probably wont move his rod much. The Grandpa’s I will work on.
Sorry, this is not working for me at all. It looks way too forced, the character are way too illustrative and look very stiff and in an uncomfortable position.
To be honest, I'd scratch it and start something new. Look out for some cool photography studio logos on Pinterest and other inspiration sites. And then spend a few hours sketching out ideas on paper, away from the computer.
Keep it up!
Ok, thank you! Do you have any suggestions for making the characters better? That is an element he definitely wants in the logo. And what else of it feels forced?
também achei um tanto forçado, não tem essência criativa