Label Clothing r2
JNF Design | Fri, 09/08/2017 - 23:02
Brief from client
Label is a clothing and art company that will sell the best designs on the best fabric for the best prices. Many releases will be highly limited editions.
I am pretty happy with this version. Thoughts? Anything I should change?
7 Comments
I see this as an alternate version, rather than a potential replacement (an app icon, for example).
Weren't you planning on modifying the icon to be more "L" like?
I feel like the angles of the letters should fit better with the symbol. They don't lean the same way.
Although be careful here. That's a REALLY strong italic slant. I'd probably compromise and lean the letters a bit as well as the overall slant of the shape.
i second this, it's irritates in the back of the head when the angles do not line up.
Thanks for the comments, I'm not sure I want to associate all too much with the letter L as I see it as having negative connotations. That is why I am fine with the symbol staying a bit more abstract.
As for the angles, I think I had tried to make them parallel to the symbol but pulled them back a bit because it felt more naturally in perspective to me. The lines would appear to come together as they recede up the incline if it was 3 dimensional.
I appreciate the feedback, I will continue to experiment; I think am close!
I'm not sure how I feel about the font choice. Is the company a outdoor hiking thing (nature and stuff) or do they want to appeal to sporty, climbing, adventures people?
I feel like the font is somewhat blend and to me it's not targeting none of the above. I like the thin font you have on the first version of this "bundle" as this would do well in the sporty segment I think.
Label is a clothing company I am creating. The target is adventurous young people, but I wan't it to be wearable by a wide audience and be wearable in any setting. The idea is to make really high quality design and fabric, without sacrificing cost.