Brands of the World

Brands of the World™ an All Creative World site
Brands of the World is the home for the largest library of freely downloadable vector logos, yearly logo awards celebrating the best identities and a logo critique community.
Follow Me on Pinterest
Google+

Logo for personal Graphic Design logo

Brief from client 

Logo using my Initials "CAV". Two versions: one with color, one just black using negative space for "A". Not sure about the "Design" text. Any feedback would be appreciated.

1 Comments

saraqroxy's picture
159 pencils
Idea
updown
Symbol
updown
Typography
updown
Colors
updown

I'm not sure if you're a designer by trade or not, but I don't think anything about this works. It's just so.... plain/simple/unattractive. Drink a beer or two (I totally stole this idea from another critique but it makes such good sense!), sit down with a pen and paper, and start writing or sketching out ideas that represent who you are as a designer (are you a graphic designer?) and start over. (I also think you should steer clear of the fonts you've used here as well- they don't mesh and the main font isn't very pretty.)

As it is now, this says nothing to me except that maybe you don't have very much experience yet.

Version history