Loopin
callmeJ | Sun, 07/19/2015 - 18:22
Brief from client
a simple logo to communicate the idea of including your goals in your digital life/ digital loop
this is the b/w silhouette I came up with, colors go in the circle, will upload after hearing your crits. Also tried a handwritten font, epic fail.. but i'll do one with handwritten font too.
5 Comments
I like the type but the symbol looks too much like a cartoon character. I would probably keep the type but go back to the drawing board on the symbol.
appreciate the feedback, it's targeted toward kids/ parents and youth, so the cartoon element was intended
I hate to say this, but I really think a handwritten font would do this some justice. The sans serif font just looks out of place where everything else (including the I dot) has a handmade aesthetic.
Not 100% sold on the icon. I get the connection, but I'm sensing there's a better execution of that idea. Maybe play around with it a bit?
The icon works as loop sign. The type is fine, but I think it needs a little touch to make it more flexible to match the icon style.
ok so i like the idea overall, but the font doesn't look good to me, the dot on the i looks like you drew it yourself? the symbol feels a little weak, you just need to work a little more on it