Make Shapes not War
Charl Nigrini | Tue, 09/30/2014 - 15:23
Brief from client
"The White Shirt:
This should say the words 'Make Shapes Not War' very bold, very bright, something rad, use up as much of the printable space as possible, we're looking for STRONG shirts."
"The White Shirt:
This should say the words 'Make Shapes Not War' very bold, very bright, something rad, use up as much of the printable space as possible, we're looking for STRONG shirts."
2 Comments
Not feeling it. This looks more Arabic then "very bold" and "very bright" and rad hasn't been used widely since 1998. It's also very hard to read. i keep getting the feeling like im supposed to be following the long lines but they end up in a dead end. Maybe use actual shapes in your design to support the text. Be creative!
I didn't get war out of that last word. At risk of being indelicate (and I am female), I saw it as twat. the W looks more like the TW brand for Tiger Woods, the a is there...after that, the t just followed.