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Notionhead

imdiekem | Sat, 06/09/2012 - 23:29

Brief from client 

Working on my own brand. New to this critique. Appreciate all feedback.

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Jon Askill | Sun, 06/10/2012 - 00:28
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Hate the 'notionhead' type. I'm sure i've seen it on a haircare product before...?

The 'creative' type doesn't work well with the other type.

As far as the graphic is concerned, I see no concept there other than the fact that it's a head, but nothing else. I can't tell if the black background on the head is just a background or some kind of concept? Maybe you should add something which suggests a 'notion' maybe. A hard thing to represent i'm sure, but yeah - back to the sketch pad in my opinion. :/

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imdiekem | Sun, 06/10/2012 - 00:50

Appreciate the thorough feedback. Haircare is a good point. Reminded me of a cosmetic the more I looked at it. The concept is that the "n" initial and the head are one. That in itself, is the notion that has been developed into a concept.

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Jon Askill | Sun, 06/10/2012 - 01:14
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Ahh, I didn't see the 'n' above the head. Maybe you should work on making it into a more prominent feature...

Look forward to the next version :).

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SF-Graphix | Mon, 06/11/2012 - 17:18
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I agree the N could be a bit more dominant i see the concept and love it cant wait for the next one.

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hp_digitalstudio | Mon, 06/18/2012 - 17:05

it has too many typographies

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