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Notionhead

Brief from client 

Working on my own brand. New to this critique. Appreciate all feedback.

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Jon Askill's picture
18 pencils
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Yeah that's 100% better already.

Still not liking the type, but it's waaaay better than the previous version. I think it's the diamond shape at the top of the 'i' and the angles of the bottoms and tops of the letters that i don't like.

I'd choose a better sans serif typeface with a heavy version for notionhead and light version of the same type for creative.

imdiekem's picture

Again, thanks for being specific. What do you think of the two newest versions of the "n" as compared to this one? I'll play more with the fonts when I get a chance.

hueroth's picture
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i don't like the colors and is not fit for creative. If you want creative you got to come with more than black and white on this one. I would go on the board table again and restart from scratch. The "n" is pretty sharp on the corners and ar bigger scales the human silouete is undetectable, try something more funny, sick, crazy but "readable. Your fonts are good on this version but I would make "creative" go aligned with head or on the whole line under "notionhead".

SF-Graphix's picture
219 pencils

Fonts are better than before, its looking good still neeeds some fine tuning tho!

hp_digitalstudio's picture
25 pencils

it´s has too many tipographies, maybe use a green color

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