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Oasis 2

MisterShot | Sun, 12/04/2016 - 22:50

Brief from client 

Work in progress. This is not client work.

Hello guys.
Any suggestions to improve this design?

4 Comments

xKillswitch's picture
424 pencils
xKillswitch | Mon, 12/05/2016 - 16:48
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This treatment is quite jarring in my opinion especially when you apply it to multiple elements like this. Props for experimenting with a wild idea, though!

Waffles's picture
233 pencils
Waffles | Mon, 12/05/2016 - 17:12

I like version 1's originality.
This version has way too much going on!

Shawali's picture
1375 pencils
Shawali | Mon, 12/05/2016 - 18:18
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Typography
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Way too complicated. The palm tree and the sun don't bring anything go the plate. The treatment you gave the symbol is complex enough.

MisterShot's picture
2 pencils
MisterShot | Tue, 12/06/2016 - 11:40

Thank you guys. You are right. Any help to improve the first version?

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