Oasis Version3
MisterShot | Wed, 12/07/2016 - 20:02
Brief from client
Work in progress. This is not client work.
My concept was to create a simple mark of a camel with an illusion feel so i used vertical lines with big contrast to achieve it. How about now?
I added a little shadow and reduced the size of the mark.
4 Comments
The colors and text are nice, but the symbol is still way too jarring for me.
The idea is there, but the repeating head is visually confusing and feels uncontrolled. Maybe keep the concept for the body but streamline into a single camel head. Nice work!
Have you considered having just one cut up camel? Make it striped? Without all the extra confusion?
Love your design, colours.