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Organic Critter

Brief from client 

Promote organic living for the family. Must appeal to women and children demographic primarily.

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thecuraga's picture
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Daw. He's SO HAPPY! I think I prefer the previous guys eyes though, something about the angle of his cheeks in this feels a bit off. It might work better if you made the angle of his cheeks a bit more subtle. I think his belly works a lot better now, also I preferred it without strokes, it gave it a softer feel. The type isn't amazing but not really offensive either, so I'd say it's passable. It's definitely the cutest leaf toaster monster I've seen in a while :)

2423media's picture
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This is a good revision over the last. I think you're hitting the demographic spot-on. I don't care for the scale or number leaves added to the body. Why not make them smaller and a few more of them to create a mane.

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I think 2423s 'leaf mane' is a great idea!! (And let's be honest, I'm partially saying that in hopes that you try it out- the cuteness would be off the charts!)

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niceee! i really like how he/she is looking really happy and this really helps it appeal to woman and children. The belly is much better but theres still something about it that doesnt look quite right, i dunno whether its the white or not. Now the type is nice like theCuraga said very passable but for me i think you need to try to get it to work with the symbol a bit more, they look a bit too much like to separate things rather than one whole logo. Nearly there though!

Stephen Fitzgerald's picture
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lol first reaction... "AWWW" lol
I like

saraqroxy's picture
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I agree about liking the old kind of eyes better- (and once again, I REALLY think you should try the leaf-mane idea!!!) but I loooooooove this.

The belly area isn't confusing anymore- and this is just super cute. But maybe think about going back to the other eyes!?!? He already looks super duper cute without the little cheek bulges. Nicely done!

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LOL! I will see what I can do with the mane. I don't know how its gonna look (especially in smaller sizes) but I will upload another version in an hour or so - Minus the cheeks :3

Thanks everyone for the great critiques!

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La elección estética y tipográfica creo que puede ser la correcta pero la elección del isotipo no lo veo con fuerza de marca, mucho nivel de detalle dejando de lado la simplicidad que se busca en la generación de una marca. No creo que sea una marca que perdure en el tiempo por ser un simple dibujo