Pajtim Morina Arts
This logo got a lot better but I still wouldn't accept it under any circumstances. If I didn't know what you were trying to do, I'd say ok, this is some abstract modern stuff. But I know you want to show a P and an M here and I can't see those letters no matter how hard I try. Also pulling down the leg of the M makes this whole thing fall to the right side, there is no ballance in the composition. The company name in this form will not be readable if you shrink the logo on a business card.