Pallot Forists
M@ | Wed, 06/15/2016 - 12:58
Brief from client
The company has been established since the 1950's they have a small shop that is green and white and is a listed building so the new logo and signage shouldn't look out of place on the shop and should keep that traditional feel. They like the colour purple so were thinking along the lines of using purple, green and a touch of orange. The obviously sell flowers but do sell other things such as gifts and fruit & veg.
So guys and girls, this is what I came up with. I dont know if I've gone a bit too crazy with all the extra flourishes of the leaves and flowers and also with the ligatures. Please let me know your thoughts!
The last logo I put up on here J&S plumbing & heating only got 1 comment!
3 Comments
Sorry mate, but I'm not quite feeling this one.
First off, I read "Palloft"
The leaves look way too duplicated, so do the flowers.
I know you can do way better than this =)
good shout on the Paloft! I hadn't even noticed it till you mentioned it! i think i might just need to strip it back and keep it as the text only without the leaves and flowers or explore some more ideas. thanks
Here is an idea- ditch all the flowers and leaves you have now. I like some of the elements in the letters (like the capital P and F), but you have a few too many of those elements as well. Strip most of those away too.
Then, take advantage of the apostrophe (look how it kind of resembles a leaf itself!) and use it as a leaf for ONE flower. Just make sure it doesn't crowd your "f" (like it does here).
Just a thought, may not work out- but worth a try. Think "less is more!"
Good luck =)