Panthers Soccer School
orchardesign | Fri, 06/30/2017 - 18:11
Brief from client
Soccer patch for soccer instruction school. Yellow and black are main school colors. To be used for camp t-shirts.
does it need more detail around words soccer school. the top of the patch is supposed to be like the top of a open book.
9 Comments
This is pretty good. As in pretty much bang on!
The only thing that would bother me most of the time is the soccer ball which looks a bit like a clip art. But even then, it doesn't really ruin anything. The tiger looks great and fierce!
Maybe, just maybe, I would have a little bit more space between the top of the patch and the word "panther", just see how it works out and give the word mark a bit more wiggle room.
But all in all, this is pretty great. You're good!
thanks for compliments. i may have gone too far with splitting badge in half with color but i took your advice and moved Panthers down just a touch. I think thats right on and also allowed me to pull the white corners in top right and left down to look more like book pages. thanks very much!!
I think I prefer solid color to the split color- but your other changes around the top are good moves.
I think that presence of the soccer ball is extra, as you have " soccer " in the subtext already. Panther needs some refining to look as a panther and her ears in particular. There are too many shades and lines which will put burden on embroidery staff. What is interesting is that a top of the panther's head resembles an open book versus the top of the shield.Good work at this point.
This looks great to me! The only thing I don't like is the football.. It sticks out too much and looks like the odd thing out. If you want to keep the football I suggest filling it in the yellow background colour instead of white.
Also check that all your blacks are the same colour black as the outside border on the shield looks darker than the text and panther. It might just be my screen though.
All in all good job!
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haha! Football is the proper name for this sport. :)
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I think not, it looks pretty good. But I'm a little worried about the quality of the logo. But I think you have a variant with the better one. Honestly, your logo gave me nostalgia for the times I was at school. We had a soccer team there I was in it too. I even skipped a lot of my lessons and get done my homework only thanks to additional sources such as https://studyhippo.com/test-answers/research/ which is helped me a lot to get good marks... But it was worth it