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Personal ID logo that includes my initials and full name.

Brief from client 

No client, it is my personal ID logo for future portfolio.

Simple version of a negative space that creates an " F " with a help of outline where a lower part of " F " naturally creates " P ". Was challenge myself to keep a simple image of letter " F " without disturbing a natural motion and a shape of it at all and thinking out of the box with two pointed fingers.

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fredrg's picture
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You know this is probably the fourth or fifth time you mentioned finger pointing, we get it, you don't like Esaban's Good Ideas logo, so knock it off you are being an ass. I've tried several different ways of communicating with you in hopes that you might realize this is a place to help other designers out, not just run them down. I'm not the only one who has tried, but you just don't get it. I am done trying to offer you any help. Good design isn't just about personal taste, save that for fine art, there are also many hard and fast rules about what works and what doesn't. Some of these are learned in schools, but many more are learned from doing it over and over again and again. Failing, starting over and failing again, many times until you figure out what appeals to as wide an audiance as you can on many different levels. Not only knowing how to make people comfortable with your design and communicate a clear consise message, but also when you need to deliberatly muddy your message or make people uncomfortable. You have such a narrow vision of seeing only right and wrong through your eyes. Contantly picking and poking at anyone who sees different, and making it even worse by crying foul everytime someone dissagrees with your vision. I'll probably get called out for this, but you have really gotten under my skin for always knocking people down both straight out and childish antics like all the "look no finger pointing" digs. With your attitude you will never have a career in design.

And if this is all one elaborate troll to get people pissed off, congratulations, you are the first to get me.

CAMOBAP's picture
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In a negative space, besides " F ", there are two pointed fingers to the right.

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well. gents above are right, lets try not to become "the arrow in the knee" of botw. The logo has something playful in it and i like it i would try to align the purple with the purple part of the text (felix) and the orange wit the orange part of the text. That would make the symbol a litllte biger. I would use something friendlier for text, like rounder at the ends but still tidy as this one.
And goddamn lets get over that finger out of the box thing.....

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Thank you,Marian, for the comments you left! I will take all into a consideration and will explore more as soon as I'll learn an illustrator.

hueroth's picture
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=)))

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I like the idea and the colours are wonderfully bright yet balanced. I can see the sharp F and I appreciate that. However when it comes to P, I am lost. Maybe check out Australian Post logo for inspiration. I believe the P can be improved.

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Thank you for a comment! I will check that Australian post logo that you have suggested.

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I like the general idea and the symbol works. But yet again, all of this is useless unless you switch to Illustrator.

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felix is not using illustrator ?

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He's been mastering MS Paint for too long =)

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that would be outstanding indeed. I think i suck at ms paint more than i do at corel draw.

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I made this awesome Chun-Li from street fighter once in MS Paint. She even could do Hyakuretsukyaku (Lightning Kick) when you turned on the animate button!

... no wait. That was in Mario Paint.

CAMOBAP's picture
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Thank you, Charlie, for the comments! I'll learn an illustrator and that is my goal for this summer. My next post will be done in illustrator.Charlie, your symbol here - what program was used to create that one?

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Illustrator..... =)

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Thank you, Charlie! I want to ask you this question - are you familiar with a french brand " French Soda " made by Geyer Freres Maison Fondee en 1895? Its a heavy made glass bottle with a flip top. Wonder if you designed a label for them, as it looks very similar in style of some of your work and especially that French Restaurant sign that you made?

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Nope, never heard of it.

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Overall I like it.

On a side note to all involved.. you need to let the one, two fingers out of the box, pun, gag, troll business go and leave it behind. It's really not even worth the thought processes involved, let alone the rest.

That said, I think the colours could be improved. I don't personally like them. I'd experiment with different contrasting colours altogether.

Also if the mark is to be offset in relation to the type, i'd make it more obviously so and also, try having the 'Felix' and 'Puchinsky' directly below the colour or letter that they relate to... this would play into the aforementioned offset distinction - if that makes sense.

I don't like the font choice either. I think it's a bit weak and generic.

You should maybe address the points above apart from the colour, and repost in black - in my opinion.

For colours, why not try...

https://color.adobe.com/

...for inspiration ;)

I'd do something like this... (colours used for differentiation purposes only)

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Thank you, Jon, for a comment! Appreciate your display and very detail input, as well. Question that I have is is there a way to log on a web page and download different fonts without paying?

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www.fontsquirrel.com is free. Some of the fonts are a bit harder to get to - as they link elsewhere.
www.dafont.com is free. Be mindful of the amount of times downloaded though. If it is through the roof, probably best to avoid it.

Just watch for the licensing restrictions. The sites will tell you if it is okay for commercial or personal use though.

CAMOBAP's picture
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Jon, I did some modifications where " F " and " P " merges... Let me know,please, if it made any improvement or would I just leave it alone the way it is?

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Another take on an illustration with your color scheme...

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This latest version is the best of the two as I like the corner of the 'p' but not sure if it takes away from the impression of the 'F' too much.. (i'd have to sleep on that and look at it with fresh eyes personally).. Sticking to your original with new font and colour changes might be slightly better in my opinion... =)

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For a general idea, you could always visit myfonts.com, where you can enter the text you want and it previews the words in the chosen font, then you could use the snipping tool to save it. Many font sites have this feature.

There are many fonts that are free and similar to other fonts too. At this stage you need to come up with solutions before buying fonts. Also once you have illustrator, there is a lot you can do with system fonts...

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p.s don't use this font haha ;)

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snipping tool (windows)...

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Thanks again, Jon!

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you know why Charlie never heard of French Soda ?

CAMOBAP's picture
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No, why ?

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Please, enlighten us =)

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because it was made with MS paint :D

Waffles's picture
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This reminds me of the time I took a night job at the recycling depot crushing cans.
It was soda pressing.

CAMOBAP's picture
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Waffles, what reminds you of a soda crushing night shift job that you took?

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The soda joke. It reminded me of soda humour.

Soda threw that joke up there!

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is good there is a job there for this. In here only the poor do this to make some extra money and they have to scavange in the garbage for it .

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Charlie, congratulation on your promotion to be our moderator here and good luck to you! From my end I'll do my very best to make your job as easy as possible - that is my promise.

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Moderator? What?

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I've been made moderator a few days ago. I can now delete spammy posts and ban spammers. Also, trolls =)

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congratulations Charlie ! And i wish you an easy task and and inspired eye in your work.

xKillswitch's picture
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Oh, nice! I feel much better about spam management now.

I didn't see any sort of news about it, so I had to wonder.

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I really don't see a problem at any skill, actually I saw your logo because I felt some curiosity about your work... What a nice surprise, it makes me very creative and good use of the resources: Type, Color, Symbol, Idea (F and P) Huge!!
Well done!!

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Thank you,Pigmenta!

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we were just joking , the problems are not real .

CAMOBAP's picture
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Yes, Marian, we need a few jokes here and there to break away from real problems that life dumping on us. How are you, my friend? When can we see a new version on your concept in here?

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I am good, thank you, and same to you. A new concept is ready, on paper, but i have to put it on screen. at the end of the week most probably will come.

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I like the last version presented and the font seems appropriate.
It is the best I've seen of all that has been presented.
Felix good work :)

CAMOBAP's picture
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Thank you, Cesar! How are you, haven't heard from you for some time?

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I've been pretty busy charting some books and I have not had time to share with you. But here I am again :)

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Cesar, can write on my email address : hacobcem@gmail.com and tell me more about your town and life in Colombia? Sorry to see your national team leaving Copa America... I cannot stand that Neymar guy from Brazil, what a pest? Anyhow drop me a note and we will start writing to each other and exchange some ideas, okay? Thanks.

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Ok thanks Felix.

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