PIUESSE is a company that produces whirlpool bath.
I think you really don't neeed outline everywhere. With a more decent gradient you could left behind this otherwise too thin outline. The kerning is a bit strange too. If you connect everything maybe you could use an "i" with curvy bottom to attach to the "u".
It doesn't work. Hard to read and I can't really make out the idea. Simplify and start over. Sorry!
It's fine. It caught my eye and that's part of what you want it to do.
And if you print on darks AND lights you could really use an outline.