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Players Sports Bar

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The Best place for Wings + Ribs & Beer in Queretaro-Mexico where you could have great moments with family and friends watching sports games and enjoying great moments. The logo is inspired by old fashion teams, as well as the typography which is intended to be a MLB team, the star icon is every one of us who could always shine alone or as a team.

Great fun + food & sports at Players Sports Bar!!!

The Best place for Wings + Ribs & Beer in Queretaro-Mexico where you could have great moments with family and friends watching sports games and enjoying great moments. The logo is inspired by old fashion teams, as well as the typography which is intended to be a MLB team, the star icon is every one of us who could always shine alone or as a team.

Great fun + food & sports at Players Sports Bar!!!

4 Comments

jacksparrow's picture
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this is not a logo...

TECNEW's picture

Thnks for your comment, but please tell me why do you say that, if its not a logo, what is it?

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Let me try and clarify what jack was maybe trying to say...

This would be perfect as a sign. You should probably give the type around the perimeter more contrast though. It's kinda hard to read some of the words. In terms of a logo, it needs to be simplified quite a bit. All of the shading, strokes around the letters, and background textures should be eliminated.

You want your logo to be:
1) easily reproducible in a single color (black). If you were to have an embroidery shop try and stitch this on a hat or coat, it would be a nightmare and probably cost a fortune.

2) readable when scaled down to say a business card size. If you sit about 6 feet away from your monitor, all you read is "Players", which even from a sign standpoint is problematic.

I think the overall style is nice for a retro feel, but in terms of a "logo", it's too complex. I would suggest making the star smaller, move "Players" up just a touch and make it slightly larger since that should be your main focal point. You may even want to try making "Players" extend off the circle. It should look intentional though. Don't let it hang over a tiny bit, but don't make it too large either. I would get rid of the ampersand and make it say fun+food+sports, slightly larger if that is going to be your tagline or slogan, and change the font to something more legible. Hope that helps clear it up a bit.

TECNEW's picture

Thank you for your comments, I think there are several things that I´ve also saw, like the "words around" that are hard to read, but this issue is consider to be or not to be in different applications, for those like you have time to look closer, it will be placed, like in magazine adds. but for a embroider in a cap or a shirt, as you said it would be a nightmare anyhow thanks again for your comments, there are very helpful