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Promotional political poster for our local women social club.

CAMOBAP | Fri, 07/17/2015 - 08:45

Brief from client 

A president of our local Iranian social club seeking a political poster about women human rights.

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xKillswitch | Fri, 07/17/2015 - 15:05
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1. This really isn't anywhere close to a poster. But that's okay, because this is a place to critique logos, right? If you wanted to portray an Iranian woman, photography would be the most powerful method.
2. I would spend more time on faces. It looks like an old blind man.

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jon_askill | Fri, 07/17/2015 - 15:31

It needs to be more 'persepolis' imho...

https://www.google.co.uk/search?q=persepolis&espv=2&biw=1366&bih=639&sou...

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mahayni | Mon, 07/20/2015 - 11:01
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I thought this is a logo critique zone, not posters.
Anyway, this looks more like a web banner to me.
The illustration does not look Iranian, nor it does look like a woman.
Also the headline does not tell me anything about human rights.

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Outside_Hollywood | Wed, 07/22/2015 - 19:02

jesus, sell your computer

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Shawali | Thu, 07/23/2015 - 00:34

Instead of bashing somebody else for his work without any constructive criticism, try to focus on your own logos, which are no better than this.

We're here to help people, not mock them.

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RBridges | Thu, 07/23/2015 - 04:41

I agree with you about contructive criticism, but why allow such nasty sarcam like camo's recent comment here: http://www.brandsoftheworld.com/critique/flying-colors
And condone this comment? Being constructive should apply to all equally.

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Waffles | Wed, 07/22/2015 - 20:51

Anyone else think this looks like Paul Shaffer?

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