SEM 2
buzzroberts | Sun, 04/26/2015 - 17:12
Brief from client
Needs to look simple, clean, professional.
Needs to work on websites, in visual media (lower thirds and banners), and in print (letterheads).
Their eye can be reworked or continued to be used.
8 Comments
An improvement from version two without any question. However, much work ahead in my humble opinion on a symbol and typography. A middle bar on " S " needs to be more curvy not as pointy, as it is at a moment to resemble an upper eye lid. A bottom lid on the other hand needs to be pointy to indicate an " M " and if you could bring down a left bar from arrow down a bit - it would ,in fact, make an " M ". Also, by making a lower eye lid pointy into an " M " - it would underline a media pouch, as well.Let me know if my comment didn't bash or offended you in any way, as Charlie was worry about a nature of my comments. I'm here to help others and I do my best, but as you know it is hard to please all.
Bopota,
LOL. I'm adding something from a few weeks ago. The problem I had with it was that the "media mailer" started looking more like a book to me. Maybe I should revisit this version? What do you think?
To all: I wanted to clarify something.
The versions that I’ve put up here are rough ideas that the CLIENT liked for whatever reason. The 5 versions that I put up here are ones that I didn’t see anyway to salvage or improve—I was hoping for suggestions to improve them or suggestions for altering them in such a way to make them better than what they are.
The CLIENT has also seen a lot of other ideas (that I feel are much stronger) but wanted to see what I could do with the versions I posted earlier.
Thanks.
i'm surely gonna be booed but....i like the symbol on this one! haha :)
not a fan of the font though
Boooooo! =)
How about something like this?
Or this, perhaps? CBC might have a case here, but the funny thing is - their eye is in a case.
At this point, you're just beating a dead horse... You really need to start off from scratch, applying the creative process I described in a previous post.
I agree with having to grab some paper and draw the s**t out of some new ideas.