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Outside_Hollywood | Wed, 07/22/2015 - 19:21

Brief from client 

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i feel myself its not "complete" more looking for suggestions than anything else

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Helene1990 | Wed, 07/22/2015 - 21:21

Do you really need the box around the logo? I don't like the font it look manually distorted. I know it is about "autobody" but is there a better way to incorporate the car in it? I think you need to do some research and go back to your sketch book.

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Cesardesign18 | Wed, 07/22/2015 - 21:45
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This really is not working, the silhouette of the car makes everything difficult to read. The typeface is very common and boring.
Incorporate an object within a text is not a good idea. Keep trying. :)

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Waffles | Wed, 07/22/2015 - 22:31

The age of your account, the location of your first post, and the use of negative space make me... apprehensive to critic this.

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unterm rad | Wed, 07/22/2015 - 23:19

But it's not two letters mashed together in a "clever" way. Couldn't be.

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unterm rad | Wed, 07/22/2015 - 23:22

::gasp::

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Waffles | Wed, 07/22/2015 - 23:55

DUN DUN DUUUUN!!!

(This post was my favourite thing of the day, btw)

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jon_askill | Thu, 07/23/2015 - 00:09

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Shawali | Thu, 07/23/2015 - 00:30
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Yup, this is definitely not working.

Graphic design 101: never EVER squizz, squash or extend a font. A font is a whole system of sizes and proportions, on which the font designer spent hours upon hours. By randomly altering it, you screw with all that and you wind up with a very messy and non-professional result.

As pointed also, the car silouhette inside the word mark makes the whole thing even more difficult to read and messy.

Pro tip: always start designing your logos on paper. Don't get too attached to your computer....

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