SummerSet Productions
dExZz | Tue, 09/27/2016 - 23:46
Brief from client
Sunset partys
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23 Comments
the sun is way too complicated, there is no real reason for it to be graded, fractured and polka dotted. The wording is fine.
It is not supposed to be the sun! :) It's just a circle with some colors that give a summer vibe (at least, to me) and the little circles remind me of an ice cream I used to eat when I was a child. But I understand it is too much...
If you have to explain the symbol, maybe it needs a better execution.
You also think it's the sun? Some people think it's an orange slice ... I do not think that the symbol has to be so specific, each person should be able to have their own interpretation.
I really like the typography portion of your logo, but agree with above the "extras" in the sun are unnecessary- they won't reproduce well in small applications. I would make a flat color version of this, more simplified. But really your type is strong enough to stand on its own! Good job!
I explained my reasons in the comment above, but I understand that there are too much details that will be lost on small applications! I'll try something more simplified and show it to you guys...
Those guys basically said what I was going to. Love the letters and white parts that go with it.
But the circle looks like a psychadelic orange slice. too much going on.
Seems that everyone agrees... I'll simplify the "orange slice" and upload version 2!
some things are better then other.
Can you be more specific?
To be fair, the orange slice is pretty cool. Don't toss it.
It just isn't right for a logo really. :)
Thank you, I don't want to toss it, I want to make it better... Now, even I think that it is too much! Don't you think I can make it right for a logo?
I have to disagree with previous comments. I like the details in the circle. Maybe lighten the colors to more yellows and just a touch of orange.
I'll make it more yellow, I think that will turn into something more "friendly"...
I like the typography. As for the symbol i feel like it's not far fetched to think of the sun, I immediately did. It's round, its orange, it has in my mind a texture that looks very much like small "explosions" on the surface of the sun. I'm not saying this because it would be wrong as a symbol, just my thoughts. All in all I think it's a bit to complicated. I also think it would be better if the text wasn't overlapping the symbol, right now I feel it's a bit hard to read the text.
My absolute first thought was to cut the "sun" at the top of the text making it more of a setting "sun", this could be to obvious though. Also the text would have much better contrast in front of the black.
I would also consider a pink and purple color theme for the symbol. I think this would also work good as for the "setting sun" coloring.
I'm not saying it does not make sense to think that is the sun, I am just saying that the intention was not that! But if this is the idea that is transmitted, not bad considering the theme... After the previous reviews I realized that in fact the symbol is too complicated, I tried to put the text under the symbol but it seems nonsense ... I will test the idea of the sun cut through even being too obvious! I leave you here a profile photo that I created before presenting the logo here...
It 'a Sun or advertising' of a orange soda? For me, the circle does not express enough energy .... It is not that it is so far away ... but still lacks something visually!
I agree with you, it lacks something... But I don't know what! Do you have any idea?
Your typography does not work. It is too thin in the end. Just make it bigger and give it more contrast – and be proud. Good idea. If it is a production company, what about giving the sun a kind of wheel or lense like a camera to give more idea what they expected.
You're right, when scaled down the word "productions" will be lost... It is not a production company, it's a company that organize partys, most of them sunset partys.
Iré directo a mi critica:
- No te quedes a la mitad : se ve o no se ve, proyecta eso o no lo proyecta.
De acuerdo a ese punto de vista yo omitiria poner la palabra productions. (No se verá en una reduccion y te ocasionara problemas que lo omitiras al final).
Quitaría los puntos de las lineas que limitan a Summer. no son importantes.
El sol : es plano y parece una pizza mal cortada... mejor una esfera con los mismos efectos.
Saludos. Suerte.
Can you please type in English, so everybody feels included in the conversation.
Gracias!
The mod.
It will be great if you type in english please, I'm not spanish, I'm portuguese.