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Sheer bros hobbies- Remote control toys
natman462 | Tue, 12/20/2011 - 23:30
Brief from client
I want a logo which shows that I sell remote control toys. mainly aviation products so preferably planes or helicopters.
But- I would lose the blue and yellow all-together. Try a different font for both. the main one has that little tail on the R and the swoop from O to S doesn't flow. It all looks a bit cramped....I would go retro. Hobby stores are a bit nostalgic these days, IMHO.
It's a nifty little plane and I like the motion the swooping oval gives it. If you stick with the fill colors, lose the gradient.
Similar on the small company, on transportation by small planes :) I think a font it is necessary to change. On colors all is good, but not a gradient :)
I think this is too crowded with a badly paired typography.
How about you try presenting this as a clean b&w drawing first?
Your logo relies too much on color and gradients to work, in my opinion simpler, stripped down b&w version with better choice of typography would be far better.
Once you achieve the desired result, you can apply colors (sparingly).
The plane and oval swoosh are nice. The fonts take away from it. I always design in black and white first. After all, a small business will need a one color logo for most of their printing.
8 Comments
I think it will sell as-is.
But- I would lose the blue and yellow all-together. Try a different font for both. the main one has that little tail on the R and the swoop from O to S doesn't flow. It all looks a bit cramped....I would go retro. Hobby stores are a bit nostalgic these days, IMHO.
It's a nifty little plane and I like the motion the swooping oval gives it. If you stick with the fill colors, lose the gradient.
Similar on the small company, on transportation by small planes :) I think a font it is necessary to change. On colors all is good, but not a gradient :)
Good job...im not a fan of the font tho but i still think you made a good job...try different fonts.
I think this is too crowded with a badly paired typography.
How about you try presenting this as a clean b&w drawing first?
Your logo relies too much on color and gradients to work, in my opinion simpler, stripped down b&w version with better choice of typography would be far better.
Once you achieve the desired result, you can apply colors (sparingly).
The plane and oval swoosh are nice. The fonts take away from it. I always design in black and white first. After all, a small business will need a one color logo for most of their printing.
I think the typography needs work. Give more attention to the symbol.
Looks like a vandal painted "HOBBIES" in that sign.
In a point ;)