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AIZON GAMES
briciodias | Fri, 01/27/2012 - 17:32
Brief from client
Empresa nova de games, é um projeto pessoal por enquanto.
the tagline font doesn't fit in with this logo on a whole and i think you need to work on composition. remove that line in the middle, it is causing a division between the logo mark and the type. You want them to work together. Symbol could do with some tweaking swell. Good execution though, keep at it.
I found poor your job. Dragon's details, typo choosed and tagline too ugly.
Start with a different and innovative dragon design, and make it most harmonic with the rest, hardly game's logo have details without any sense or don't make applicable in anywhere.
Como veo que has escrito en portugués, te contesto en español porque creo que me entenderás. A mi el logotipo me gusta mucho. Es muy fresco y tiene un aire muy Manga. Tal vez sí cambiaría la tipografía del "Awaken your imagination" y pondría sobre todo una sans-seriff. También separaría un poco "Aizon" de "Games", están demasiado juntos. El resto bueno, tal vez haya algo de espacio en la composición del dragón pero lo veo aceptable. Buen trabajo!
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the tagline font doesn't fit in with this logo on a whole and i think you need to work on composition. remove that line in the middle, it is causing a division between the logo mark and the type. You want them to work together. Symbol could do with some tweaking swell. Good execution though, keep at it.
The dragon looks like a warthog and it has no lower jaw. If the dragon is spiting fire I'd like to see it with the mouth open.
Reorganize your elements. Give your design a defined shape and remove the separator.
its got potential...maybe a few changes here and there to make the logo stronger will do. good start
I found poor your job. Dragon's details, typo choosed and tagline too ugly.
Start with a different and innovative dragon design, and make it most harmonic with the rest, hardly game's logo have details without any sense or don't make applicable in anywhere.
Como veo que has escrito en portugués, te contesto en español porque creo que me entenderás. A mi el logotipo me gusta mucho. Es muy fresco y tiene un aire muy Manga. Tal vez sí cambiaría la tipografía del "Awaken your imagination" y pondría sobre todo una sans-seriff. También separaría un poco "Aizon" de "Games", están demasiado juntos. El resto bueno, tal vez haya algo de espacio en la composición del dragón pero lo veo aceptable. Buen trabajo!
It has some potential...
Get rid of the line.
Your dragon needs a lower jaw.
Pay attention to proportion and the placement of your elements.
Tag line looks odd in the composition. As well as the font.
l'effetto non è male solo scollegato. Togli la linea che divide il testo dal logo e rafforza un pò il drago poi avvicinalo un pò.