Anissa Photography
ANewman20 | Fri, 08/03/2012 - 15:47
Brief from client
Logo design for my work; photography.
I came up with this with the idea of heartbeats. Photography is something I love, and I thought, what better way to show that then using the design of a heartbeat with my name being the center of attention?
11 Comments
This is really bad. I can only say I see a shade of hope for "anissa" as manner, but this is got to be worked , give a decent font , structured and refined, the idea of both "A" is a good one. The heart and "photography" are to be more clear, smooth and refined. This looks childish and naive, maybe you were looking for that but is not good as a logo. I am not gonna say to relate it with photography since it's about your identity, but try to make it both creative, courageous and powerful in the same time. For the moment your logo is only courageous but chaotic and weak......
I must agree with Hueroth, its too stringy, unreadable and all over the place. As I always say, logos must not be difficult to understand; the message must be there instantly. Take the top grey line out and cross the As for starters.
Thank you both so much. This is no way shape or form a final for my logo. I am simply putting the idea out there and making changes along the way. I will keep the ideas of both "A"s, and I will now work on a stronger font. However, I was thinking of adding a camera as the frame for the logo? Tell me what you think...
The camera as a frame is interesting we would need to see it in action, i like your idea for the logo but i think you should come up with another concept, I can not see any outcome with the heart beat looking good. maybe google heart beat logos and see if you can get any visual reference.
Maybe the idea is not that bad, but it reads difficult - so - try your heartbeat idea, but with better graphics, thicker lines, and very important: - readable!
The idea is a good one, but "heartbeats" sounds more like audio production than still photography. However, if that's what you want try building around a concept of a shorter frequency higher amplitude in your EKG. For example how one beat of the heart would look on an EKG display. This as it is looks more like a scribble. By using a shorter frequency or smaller segment of the beat, you have more room to develop your text along a more controlled wave.
I agree with the above. Try to show you love in a diferent way...
I don't see a heart monitor here, I see yarn/string. I like the concept, but the execution is confusing. Needs a rethink.
Mmmmm... too complicated... hard to read...
oh dear god..
Horror!!!!! oops.. sorry.