FKNextDesign

this is really quite awful... i dont have a clue what the coloured lines are and what they are supposed to show and the font doesnt look good either having it in light grey isnt good because you cant see it very well. I suugest you start over again and draw some ideas out on a piece of paper first to see what works and what doesnt before diving straight in!

M@ is right, unfortunately. This doesn't look good.

The "next" thing with an arrow is old and the way you put your font makes it barely readable.

As M@ says, you're better off starting from scratch, with a pen and a piece before, but not before checking out some inspiration web sites such as inspirationfeed.com.

Good luck!!

Yeaaaaaaaaah..... this isn't lookin' good. There are a lot of issues here, but really.... I think you'd better just go back to the drawing board and start fresh.

The whole thing is just really plain- too much white space, it's really boring altogether, it's the same shape repeated a few times in different colors, the name of the place is WAY too light- it's practically disappearing, etc...

I agree with M@ in saying that you should sketch out some ideas before diving in again- but keep at it!