JBWORLD

There are so many things wrong with this, I don't even know where to begin.

It's no better than any of your other ones, it might even be worse. I don't intend my comments to be mean, I really don't.

It doesn't 'fit' together, it looks more tossed together in my opinion. The main thing that's bugging me about this (other than the fact that it's just not nice to look at) is the breaks in the thin border around the main circle. Why does it break so irregularly? Over the 'b' there's a tiny little chunk missing, whereas by the hook of the 'J' there's what seems to be the right amount, but then at the top of the 'J' there's way too much space.

But none of that really matters I guess, because I just don't like this at all. Again, I'm not trying to be a negative nancy, but I think you should either do something COMPLETELY DIFFERENT (all of your versions 1, and 3-6 are basically the same thing) OR just hire a graphic designer.

None of the versions you uploaded so far are good because you just doodling away some random fonts and lay outs.

Try to come up with something that has significance.