Next Level Nina
dlsloan | Mon, 12/05/2011 - 01:57
Brief from client
Client trying to begin a new business and wanted a logo showing how people could reach the next level in their life. Primary colors were shades of blue and white.
Trying to get better at logos. Once this one is done, I'll move on to the next.
4 Comments
Im sorry but you are flogging a dead horse with this 'concept'. The character is poorly drawn and unoriginal, way too much negative space and the typography way too thin and small compared to the size of everything else whilst being entirely the wrong font.
Best thing I can suggest is stay away from the computer, get a pen and paper and draw and draw until you come up with something strong! Stay away from the cliches which may be hard with "Next level" but there are simple and elegant ways of representing that.
All the best.
Not working. Too shiny and the typography is completely broken.
You really need to abandon this concept and come up with a new idea and execution. Neither of what you posted will work.
Buy some books on graphic and logo design and study before you take another attempt at this.
i second the leaving this concept. go with something completely different. i think it has lost it's entire idea/concept. i don't know how much time was spent on this, but i feel like you were rushing to try and get something going, you have something going, but just not the right direction at all. i agree with what 11Elevendc, botw, and splashster said.