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Brief from client 

hope this is closer

trying to choose colors that are easier on the eyes

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hueroth's picture
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i can see somehow an improvement but improving is not the idea of this logo, is taking back from ZERO.

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Esto que hace posteado aquí?! Muy Malo

geracao ideias's picture
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Start all over again... if you dont have a good font folder, you can find more fonts in www.dafont.com

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There has been a lot of good advice, but it's not being implemented. First consider that this logo will only be 2D. Don't try to add 3D depth or gradient effects. Second, the colors don't work well, a greyscale version would look terrible since you've used similar shades for the color pallet. While you're designing, just use black and white, it will help you figure out the design. Next, the type choice has zero style. The radio waves don't look like part of the design, but more like a last minute overlay. Try cutting out the wall element with the circle so there is no conflict with your text. What happened to the base of the building structure, is that it?

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ok, this is a raw sketch , but i hope you will get the point, use two colors, no effects and a decent readable font....

hueroth's picture
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ok, just got the CS installed....

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Cool!!

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the font is not very well aligned but i observed after i put it on the site....

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You cant have the font over the logo like that it blends in and is to hard to see.
this is an improvement over your last uploads but still has a ton of work, i agree with hueroths sketch i think if you can draw that up and but your twist on it i would love to see it!

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