Seniore

It frustrates me when people upload things like this?

can you not see that whatever that black "thing" is rudely overpowering the sentore is nothing to do with fashion.
Is it an eyebrow?
is it the half of a moustache?
is it a wig blowing in the wind?

whatever it is its to big. its too black and it looks like it could take over the world!!!

over and out!

Is sentore or seniore ? Carlgoldson is right in the comment above, try make some sketches before actually make the final work, it offers you the luxury of multiple choices , give some balance to the composition at least. If you really want to keep that "whatever it is) of hair you got to make it simple and balanced with the font, I would suggest going above the font and the same size, but be careful, dont make it worst than it is now, is gotta have some stile , look soft and light enough but not girlish. I would choose another font, sharp and round , give men some attitude, not just a font, try not to use just capitals on the name.....good luck.

thank you guys, i need comments like this to shape my work. sorry for frustration :)

i was in a bad mood yesterday, maybe i took it out on your design.. reading back it comes across quite harsh.

start again from scratch and play around with different fonts and my advice would be lose the black thing and take a look at this.

http://speckyboy.com/2011/04/06/50-simplistic-minimal-and-inspirational-...

this is the direction you would need to be heading in..

Agree, needs to have that mustache eyebrow thing redefined.

This link has your name on it:
http://www.whorange.net/whorange/2010/08/a-field-guide-to-typestaches.html

A fine collection of typographic mustaches ;)