srig photography

Overall, I like this concept a lot. Is the intention to have the letters, s, r, i, g in the illustration? The s and the g are obvious and I can make out where the r could be but I don't see the i. Maybe thicken up the line weight and round off the ends of the strokes. I think with a little refinement, this could be really nice and clever.

I can't read what letters are supposed to be in the camera besides perhaps an S and a G, and those are rather abstract. Work on legibility.

like all of it, especially the style, but the name isn't clear in the illustration. but then again, does it need to be?