minimalist approach focusing on metaphor
This is an academic project to design my visual identity while focusing on metaphors.. (Can you see a fox there?)
yes I can, I would also remove the slash and would use a more massive font for "motion graphics.
Nice work i agree with hueroth remove the slash and lets see a different font on motion graphics
here is the coloured version I have changed the text for 'motion graphics"....
it needs kerning I can see ...please see the font
i like it better , did you tried to make it bigger, just a little bigger....?